Thursday, 21 June 2012

The Long Walk By Brooke

The  long   walk          by   Brooke 

 On  Tuesday,  room  2   and  2  mums  went   on a walk  around  Mangonui  heritage  trail .We   walked  down  a  steep  mountain. We looked  at  the  old  shops   and  houses. Next  we saw  the  the  police  station, then  we  went  through  a  dark  tunnel. We saw  some patterned  water to. I  hope  we  will  go  again. I  liked  the patterned water. When  room 2  got  back  we  had a photo  beside  room 7.
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3 comments:

  1. Mangonui21 June 2012 at 17:28

    Cool story Brooke

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  2. Mangonui24 June 2012 at 19:31

    Really enjoyed your story and how you wrote about the water been patterned. - Mr Sedcole

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  3. Unknown28 June 2012 at 21:02

    Cool story alright!

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